Number one is weak.

I just got notified via Reddit that someone doesn't like my fanfic.
And I got to thinking.
Maybe it's high-time to change the paragraphing.

So, I'm pulling Chapter 1 off the shelf to fix it. I'm also changing the not-actually-published chapters 4 and 5 where I tried to go back to that to revert that going-back.

Also, I'm putting a notice on the story to NOT READ IT RIGHT NOW. IT IS BROKEN. YOU CAN'T READ IT RIGHT NOW.

Thanks for putting up with this.

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